commit be77723d2e27eca5e25da2d6347948f9ef6a9ceb
parent 4fe2bda96927e859d9049a4174920e9a1fbed3f2
Author: SwiftWorship <tay@swiftie.one>
Date: Thu, 20 Oct 2022 15:22:53 -0500
changed: mia's consent is written as speech
Included Mia speaking on the name/age/consent required before filming.
Signed-off-by: SwiftWorship <tay@swiftie.one>
Diffstat:
1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/story.md b/story.md
@@ -179,13 +179,16 @@ time. His digital talents eliminating the need for a crew.
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-Doing her best to focus on the camera, Mia takes a deep breath in. Trying to
-keep her voice from wavering, she rattles off what's needed of her. A bit too
-quickly and stiffly, but she got the first part over with.
-
-The lump in her throat returns, but she tries to push it back down. She glances
-around the room, trying to plan out her strategy of where to go next. If she
-gets an idea of what to expect, it should help to soothe her nerves.
+Doing her best to focus on the camera, Mia takes a deep breath in to try and
+keep her voice from wavering. "My name's Mia Dolan, I'm 24 years old. And
+obviously I'm here today to film an adult movie." She hoped that last bit came
+off light-hearted, but of course is now overthinking if it sounded too combative
+or dour. "Fully consenting adult!" she adds in quickly. Saved it.
+
+Even so, the lump in her throat returns. She tries to push it back down, but
+it's persistent. She glances around the room, trying to plan out her strategy of
+where to go next. If she gets an idea of what to expect, it should help to
+soothe her nerves.
"Okay, so what's the plan for today," she said while fighting back the lump
determined on keeping her quiet. "I've never done something like this before, so
