commit cef0731cd4571a98eba4d4b3c70d0583d83cee13
parent 7157b16effb7f1418cfcc975cabddb9aab5ca358
Author: SwiftWorship <tay@swiftie.one>
Date: Fri, 6 Jan 2023 14:16:38 -0600
added: Jake is not in the room, ends at his knock
Signed-off-by: SwiftWorship <tay@swiftie.one>
Diffstat:
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/story.md b/story.md
@@ -47,8 +47,7 @@ most of the events starting tomorrow.
guests sleeping in ice boxes?"
Her eyes quickly scan the chat. Most people are agreeing with the
-preposterousness of the temperature, a few random shitposters, but she sees one
-comment that throws her off for a second: _who's that guy in the bed behind
-her?_
-
-She completely forgot that she wasn't here alone.
+preposterousness of the temperature, a few random shitposters, the usual
+suspects. Before she gets the chance to begin her updates, she suddenly hears a
+knock behind her coming from the direction of the door. _Oh shit_, Gibi thought.
+It entirely slipped her mind that she had a date tonight.
