commit 3591bc2374a8748b27ef2f8289edfeb10baa80f4
parent be77723d2e27eca5e25da2d6347948f9ef6a9ceb
Author: John Shepard <j.shepard800@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 20 Oct 2022 17:16:57 -0400
added: john probes for a story
Signed-off-by: SwiftWorship <tay@swiftie.one>
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@@ -198,3 +198,34 @@ John had told her where to go to see his previous scenes he's done with other
girls, but Mia couldn't stomach to watch. It would've probably helped knowing
exactly what to expect, but it also would have made it too real; she had wanted
to live in blissful ignorance as long as she could before the day arrived.
+
+---
+
+Mia’s quick addition brings an honest smile to John’s face, his lips turning
+upward above a nicely shaped chin. The red lights go off after a long moment,
+the ‘you can’t blackmail me now’ cover his ass part in the bank. His hand lowers
+from the camera, forearm exposed from the rolled up sleeve of a button down
+dress shirt. Navy dress pants below that and a pair of leather loafers below
+_that_. Business casual, a bit Jim from _The Office_. Just more handsome, he
+hoped. A professional vibe, as if you were undergoing employee orientation and
+he was your hiring person.
+
+“We start with that and add on to it. Name and age…but I’d recommend now your
+real name and don’t lie about your age too much. We’re going to have you talk
+about yourself and you can play with the details but make it feel real. You said
+you were a waitress so if you talk about that maybe we talk about a cute
+customer that gave you his phone number as a tip and you blew him out back but
+don’t try and say, like, a group of guys gangbanged you in the bathroom after
+you closed up.”
+
+The ‘adult’ language came naturally, he didn’t mince words, but at least they
+didn’t come like he was trying to shock her. However they were still a reminder
+at why she was here.
+
+“The more you say, the better. Get comfortable, I won’t cut you off. If you’re a
+storyteller tell a story”
+
+Mia asked what was the plan and there it was plainly. Let’s just talk. But of
+course that wasn’t everything and John couldn’t just stop there.
+
+“Then, you know, the _other_ stuff.”
